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Joyce Carol Oates makes an old novel new again

July 27, 2003

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— Joyce Carol Oates has written a novel both very old and very new.

"A Garden of Earthly Delights" was first published in 1967 and received a National Book Award nomination. Based on Oates' own family history, it tells the three-part story of migrant worker Carleton Walpole, his determined daughter, Clara, and grandson Swan, who inadvertently commits murder.

The Modern Library, which specializes in publishing older works, has put out a new hardcover edition of "Earthly Delights." Publishing director David Ebershoff had expected Oates simply to check the text for errors, only to discover that the author had almost completely rewritten the original book.

"This is the most extensive revision I've ever seen; it was essentially a new manuscript," says Ebershoff, who has reissued novels by John Irving, William Styron and many other living writers.

Through the years, countless works have been amended, at least in the author's mind. Thomas Hardy used to pull copies of his old books off his shelves and write notes in the margins. Gore Vidal recalls seeing his friend, Tennessee Williams, revise an already published short story. When Vidal asked why he was still working on something already in print, Williams responded, "Well, obviously it's not finished."

But the leap from private regret to public action has been relatively rare. Some liken the process to doctoring an old yearbook photo while others simply find themselves too busy to bother.

"I'm not opposed to revising books in principle, and I wouldn't tell other writers what to do, but I couldn't imagine such an enterprise until I was in my 90s, when, if I were still alive, I might not have anything new to say," says John Irving, who has had "The World According to Garp" and other novels reissued, with minimal changes.

"There are so many other things I want to write. ... At the moment, I'm two novels ahead of myself, and that's always been the case. When I'm writing a novel, I've already thought of the next one I want to write."

Oates, whose other books include "Them" and "We Were the Mulvaneys," is a famously prolific writer who averages at least a new novel per year. She says she needed just a couple months to rework "A Garden of Earthly Delights."

Adding mature complexity

While the plot is essentially unchanged, countless details have been reimagined. In the original text, she describes the wedding picture of Carleton and his wife, Pearl, noting that Pearl's "shy, toothed child's smile took away from Carleton's expression the seriousness it should have had."

Author Joyce Carol Oates poses for a portrait in her Princeton,
N.J., home in this March 20, 2000, file photo. Oates has almost
completely rewritten her 1967 novel, "A Garden of Earthly
Delights," for a new hardcover edition published in 2003 by The
Modern Library.

Author Joyce Carol Oates poses for a portrait in her Princeton, N.J., home in this March 20, 2000, file photo. Oates has almost completely rewritten her 1967 novel, "A Garden of Earthly Delights," for a new hardcover edition published in 2003 by The Modern Library.

But in the new edition, Oates pictures them both "gazing intently at the camera they'd been commanded by the photographer, eyes widened in the effort not to blink. They'd tried so hard they'd forgotten to smile!"

In an "afterword" for the new edition, the 65-year-old Oates explains that she wanted to present the book's characters "more clearly, unoccluded by an eager writer's young prose." She recalls that she wrote the novel in a moment of youthful "white heat," inspired but immature.

"In re-examining 'Garden,' I saw that the original narrative voice had not been adequate to suggest, still less to evoke, the complexity of the novel's principal characters," she writes.

"They (her characters) seem to me now like figures in a 'restored' film or figures seen through a lens that required polishing and sharper focusing."

Oates is the most notable recent case of a writer changing old material. But in this specialized art, no one matches Henry James, who reworked more than a dozen books.

In the early 1900s, James published the multivolume "New York" editions of earlier novels, applying his later, denser prose style to "The Portrait of a Lady" and other works. James confided in one preface that he had thought of "rewriting as so difficult, and even so absurd," but he eventually justified the process as, at worst, "an earnest invitation to the reader to dream again in my company."

Publishers, not writers, are more likely to change a book, especially one that was substantially cut in the writer's lifetime. Novels such as Stephen Crane's "The Red Badge of Courage" and Theodore Dreiser's "An American Tragedy" have been released, posthumously, in much larger editions that reflect the original manuscript.

Critics have debated whether publishers have the right to alter a dead writer's text. A year ago, Harcourt Brace released an "expanded" edition of Robert Penn Warren's "All the King's Men," in which some explicit passages and other material were restored.

The editor of the new edition, Noel Polk, wrote in his afterword that the restored text was "a novel superior to, more interesting and complex" than the original published edition. But Oates disagrees, noting that the book had been reprinted in Warren's lifetime.

"At that point, if he had wanted to revise his novel he would have," she says. "It seems morally wrong for a researcher to go back into the files and put together a new edition."

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